Fix grammar and wording of Voice Gate + Voice Ban

Co-authored-by: Joe Banks <[email protected]>

2 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/bot/exts/moderation/infraction/infractions.py b/bot/exts/moderation/infraction/infractions.py
index fc01eee9e..f2ca6a763 100644
--- a/bot/exts/moderation/infraction/infractions.py
+++ b/bot/exts/moderation/infraction/infractions.py
@@ -431,8 +431,8 @@ class Infractions(InfractionScheduler, commands.Cog):
             # DM user about infraction expiration
             notified = await _utils.notify_pardon(
                 user=user,
-                title="Voice ban pardoned",
-                content="You can now verify yourself for voice access again.",
+                title="Voice ban ended",
+                content="You can verify yourself for voice access again.",
                 icon_url=_utils.INFRACTION_ICONS["voice_ban"][1]
             )
 
diff --git a/bot/exts/moderation/voice_gate.py b/bot/exts/moderation/voice_gate.py
index 05a3b31de..639642068 100644
--- a/bot/exts/moderation/voice_gate.py
+++ b/bot/exts/moderation/voice_gate.py
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ FAILED_MESSAGE = """{user} you don't meet with our current requirements to pass
 MESSAGE_FIELD_MAP = {
     "verified_at": f"haven't been verified for at least {GateConf.minimum_days_verified} days",
     "voice_banned": "are voice banned",
-    "total_messages": f"haven't sent at least {GateConf.minimum_messages} messages",
+    "total_messages": f"have sent less than {GateConf.minimum_messages} messages",
 }
 
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ class VoiceGate(Cog):
         - You must not be actively banned from using our voice channels
         """
         # Send this as first thing in order to return after sending DM
-        await ctx.send("You will get response to DM.")
+        await ctx.send(f"{ctx.author.mention}, check your DMs.")
 
         try:
             data = await self.bot.api_client.get(f"bot/users/{ctx.author.id}/metricity_data")
@@ -57,14 +57,14 @@ class VoiceGate(Cog):
             if e.status == 404:
                 embed = discord.Embed(
                     title="Not found",
-                    description=f"{ctx.author.mention} Unable to find Metricity data about you.",
+                    description=f"We were unable to find user data for you. Please try again shortly, if this problem persists please contact the server staff through Modmail.",
                     color=Colour.red()
                 )
                 log.info(f"Unable to find Metricity data about {ctx.author} ({ctx.author.id})")
             else:
                 embed = discord.Embed(
                     title="Unexpected response",
-                    description="Got unexpected response from site. Please let us know about this.",
+                    description="We encountered an error while attempting to find data for your user. Please try again and let us know if the problem persists.",
                     color=Colour.red()
                 )
                 log.warning(f"Got response code {e.status} while trying to get {ctx.author.id} Metricity data.")
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ class VoiceGate(Cog):
         self.mod_log.ignore(Event.member_update, ctx.author.id)
         await ctx.author.add_roles(discord.Object(Roles.voice_verified), reason="Voice Gate passed")
         embed = discord.Embed(
-            title="Congratulations",
+            title="Voice gate passed",
             description="You have been granted permission to use voice channels in Python Discord.",
             color=Colour.green()
         )