Rewriting of non-code sections.

The previous version began with "Iterating over range-len is a common approach ...", which sounds like an endorsement. Also removed "is guaranteed to produce elements in the same order", as I don't think anyone is actually confused about that. (I wrote the previous version--this is a criticism of my own writing.)

1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/bot/resources/tags/range-len.md b/bot/resources/tags/range-len.md
index 4bd377d59..76fe9051e 100644
--- a/bot/resources/tags/range-len.md
+++ b/bot/resources/tags/range-len.md
@@ -2,12 +2,12 @@
 embed:
     title: "Pythonic way of iterating over ordered collections"
 ---
-Iterating over `range(len(...))` is a common approach to accessing each item in an ordered collection.
+Beginners often iterate over `range(len(...))` because they look like Java or C-style loops, but this is almost always a bad practice in Python.
 ```py
 for i in range(len(my_list)):
     do_something(my_list[i])
 ```
-The pythonic syntax is much simpler, and is guaranteed to produce elements in the same order:
+It's much simpler to iterate over the list (or other sequence) directly:
 ```py
 for item in my_list:
     do_something(item)