From 1ced4fc37f2969765feac4f090d42148ad4377e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leon Sandøy Date: Tue, 1 Oct 2019 22:55:19 +0200 Subject: Update the landing page text. The new text was written by Tizzysaurus in his website cleanup project, and lifted from his google doc. --- pydis_site/templates/home/index.html | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html b/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html index 205e92ff..bccea71a 100644 --- a/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html +++ b/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html @@ -19,21 +19,21 @@

We're a large community focused around the Python programming language. - We believe anyone can learn programming, and are very dedicated to helping - novice developers take their first steps into the world of code. We also + We believe anyone can learn to code, and are very dedicated to helping + novice developers take their first steps into the world of programming. We also attract a lot of expert developers who are seeking friendships, collaborators, - or looking to hone their craft by teaching and getting involved in the community. + or to hone their craft by teaching and getting involved with the community.

- We organise regular community events like code jams, open source hackathons, - seasonal events and community challenges. Through our sponsorships and with - help from donations, we are even able to award prizes to the winners of our events. + We organise regular community events such as code jams, open-source hackathons, + seasonal events and community challenges. Through our sponsorships, and with + the help from donations, many of our events even have prizes to win!

You can find help with most Python-related problems in one of our help channels. - Our staff of nearly 50 dedicated expert Helpers are available around the clock + Our staff of over 50 dedicated expert Helpers, are available around the clock in every timezone. Whether you're looking to learn the language or working on a complex project, we've got someone who can help you if you get stuck.

-- cgit v1.2.3 From 0c43428ef86666dfb9d4baf119b0a30ba8dbe5cf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leon Sandøy Date: Sat, 5 Oct 2019 09:20:23 +0200 Subject: Address code review from Scragly and Mark. Makes various minor changes to commas and formulations. --- pydis_site/templates/home/index.html | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html b/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html index bccea71a..bf217fe8 100644 --- a/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html +++ b/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html @@ -22,18 +22,18 @@ We believe anyone can learn to code, and are very dedicated to helping novice developers take their first steps into the world of programming. We also attract a lot of expert developers who are seeking friendships, collaborators, - or to hone their craft by teaching and getting involved with the community. + and who wish to hone their craft by teaching and getting involved in the community.

We organise regular community events such as code jams, open-source hackathons, - seasonal events and community challenges. Through our sponsorships, and with - the help from donations, many of our events even have prizes to win! + seasonal events, and community challenges. Through our sponsorships and donations, + many of our events even have prizes to win!

You can find help with most Python-related problems in one of our help channels. - Our staff of over 50 dedicated expert Helpers, are available around the clock + Our staff of over 50 dedicated expert Helpers are available around the clock in every timezone. Whether you're looking to learn the language or working on a complex project, we've got someone who can help you if you get stuck.

-- cgit v1.2.3 From c44b5a740a69de5b479100f4c023bb80db8605a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leon Sandøy Date: Sat, 5 Oct 2019 17:47:05 +0200 Subject: Make the homepage paragraphier. --- pydis_site/templates/home/index.html | 10 ++++------ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html b/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html index bf217fe8..45fb56e9 100644 --- a/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html +++ b/pydis_site/templates/home/index.html @@ -23,15 +23,13 @@ novice developers take their first steps into the world of programming. We also attract a lot of expert developers who are seeking friendships, collaborators, and who wish to hone their craft by teaching and getting involved in the community. - -

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We organise regular community events such as code jams, open-source hackathons, seasonal events, and community challenges. Through our sponsorships and donations, many of our events even have prizes to win! - -

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You can find help with most Python-related problems in one of our help channels. Our staff of over 50 dedicated expert Helpers are available around the clock in every timezone. Whether you're looking to learn the language or working on a -- cgit v1.2.3