From 52be2e92cfe62a0ed35811ec73e22e3e63275e88 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Xithrius <15021300+Xithrius@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 3 May 2021 16:14:30 -0700
Subject: Removed opinions from text.

Co-authored-by: Boris Muratov <8bee278@gmail.com>
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 bot/resources/tags/str-join.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/bot/resources/tags/str-join.md b/bot/resources/tags/str-join.md
index a6b8fb793..c835f9313 100644
--- a/bot/resources/tags/str-join.md
+++ b/bot/resources/tags/str-join.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 **Joining Iterables**
 
-Suppose you want to nicely display a list (or some other iterable). The naive solution would be something like this.
+If you want to display a list (or some other iterable), you can write:
 ```py
 colors = ['red', 'green', 'blue', 'yellow']
 output = ""
@@ -10,16 +10,16 @@ for color in colors:
 print(output)
 # Prints 'red, green, blue, yellow, '
 ```
-However, this solution is flawed. The separator is still added to the last element, and it is slow.
+However, the separator is still added to the last element, and it is relatively slow.
 
-The better solution is to use `str.join`.
+A better solution is to use `str.join`.
 ```py
 colors = ['red', 'green', 'blue', 'yellow']
 separator = ", "
 print(separator.join(colors))
 # Prints 'red, green, blue, yellow'
 ```
-This solution is much simpler, faster, and solves the problem of the extra separator. An important thing to note is that you can only `str.join` strings. For a list of ints,
+An important thing to note is that you can only `str.join` strings. For a list of ints,
 you must convert each element to a string before joining.
 ```py
 integers = [1, 3, 6, 10, 15]
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